Lauren does a good job at organizing her argument. She
begins by stating the issue at hand, which is that “the Supreme Court decided
last month that under the Affordable Care Act, the expansion of Medicaid should
be optional.” However, this wording is slightly off in saying that “Medicaid
should be optional.” The Supreme Court actually made the decision allowing
states to block Medicaid growth without a penalty.
Next, Lauren focuses on Rick Perry, the governor of Texas.
She explains that Rick Perry finds that expanding Medicaid is a direct
violation of the Constitution and Texas’ “founding principles of limited
government.” After research, I found this statement to be true; however,
Lauren does not provide an embedded link to her quote, and I was unable to accept
it as being credible unless I researched the statement for myself.
Lauren then elaborates that according to Rick Perry, the
program would not result in neither more affordable care nor better “patient
protection.” However, Lauren failed to provide an embedded link for this quote
as well.
Lauren then states that Perry’s “confident and defiant
decision is good,” but she does not elaborate on how it is good. Instead, she
states, “We can’t help but notice some major flaws in it.” I found this to be
rather confusing. I wish she would have provided some examples as to how Perry’s
decision is good, and then, pointed out that there are, however, some flaws.
Lauren’s next paragraph states, “Another question is that
would it end up costing less if the uninsured Texans were relying on emergency
rooms every time with something as minor as the common cold?” I found this
sentence hard to decipher. I do not understand where the information came from
or how it comes to that conclusion. Again, an embedded link would have been
helpful.
Finally, Lauren points out that Perry needs to “suggest
ways in which he is going to deal with the negative effects of his decisions.”
I agree that Perry does not do a good job of addressing how he will deal with
the negative effects. However, explaining what the negative effects are would
be beneficial in Lauren’s article. For example, according to an article in the Dallas Business Journal, “rejection of
Medicaid expansion in Texas will shift costs to the privately insured, increase
uncompensated care expenses and raise mortality rates, all while more uninsured
patients crowd North Texas emergency rooms.”
Overall, Lauren makes
solid points; however, she lacks making her article credible. Citing her
sources would have made this blog more beneficial for the reader.